


From the storyboard shown above, I wrote this script over the weekend, and it still needs a little work but in general it covers what we need to show in the film.
SOPHIE (V.O., THROUGHOUT)
(Various words picked out from the diary, finishing with
“And I just feel so alone”.)
INT. BEDROOM – LATE EVENING
Sophie walks into her bedroom and sits at the desk. She opens the diary, which has the title “Welcome to MY World” on the cover, and flicks through several pages, which contain the credits and the first page of writing.
INT. BATHROOM – EARLY EVENING
Sophie is sitting on the closed lid of the toilet, holding an open pair of scissors to her arm, preparing to cut herself. She hesitates, then closes the scissors, putting them down on the edge of the sink.
INT. BEDROOM – LATE EVENING
Sophie turns the page of her diary and picks up the scissors on her desk with her left hand, looks at them, and puts them back again.
INT. DINING ROOM – EARLY EVENING
Sophie is sitting at the table at dinner with her parents. She is not eating; instead pushing the food around on her plate.
FATHER
Sophie, eat your dinner.
SOPHIE
I'm not hungry.
FATHER
I don't care if you're hungry or not, eat it!
MOTHER
Just eat it, sweetheart.
SOPHIE
I'm not hungry!
Sophie gets up to leave.
FATHER
Sit down and eat it.
Sophie runs out of the room.
INT. BEDROOM – LATE EVENING
Sophie looks down at her right hand, wrapped in a bandage. She pulls down her sleeve to cover it, and turns another page of her diary.
INT. BATHROOM – EARLY EVENING
Sophie slits her right wrist.
INT. BEDROOM – LATE EVENING
Sophie's tears fall on the diary and smudge the ink.
EXT. SCHOOL PLAYGROUND – LUNCH
Sophie is leaning against a wall, standing with a group of friends, who are talking amongst themselves. None of them speaks to Sophie.
EXT. SCHOOL PLAYGROUND – EARLY AFTERNOON
Sophie is still where she was earlier, but the playground is now empty. Sophie pushes herself up and walks across the empty playground to the gates.
INT. BEDROOM – LATE EVENING
Sophie gets up and walks to her bed, lifts a sheet and takes a bottle of alcohol. There are several other bottles, full and empty, under the bed. Sophie walks back to the desk, opens the bottle, and drinks. She turns another page of the diary.
INT. BEDROOM – NIGHT (ALT #1)
Sophie is lying on her bed, face down, screaming into her pillow.
INT. BEDROOM – NIGHT (ALT #2)
Sophie is lying face down on her bed, crying.
INT. BEDROOM – LATE EVENING
Sophie turns another page of the diary, and removes a plaster from her arm. Blood drips onto the diary. She puts the plaster back on.
INT. BEDROOM – NIGHT
Sophie's father is standing in the doorway to her bedroom. Sophie is sat on the bed, duvet pulled around her, looking scared.
INT. BEDROOM – LATE EVENING
Sophie closes the diary, turns off the light, and gets into bed. She lies awake, staring at the ceiling.
Start of film
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